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Oh, well you know, this, this is a thing i guess. I like the colours.
I CAN'T HOLD IT IN, the stuff you make is too fun to watch. Love you as always.

Oh, well erm, that was. good.
Pretty funny stuff man, love the screams abit too much. They sound so realistic. Like im actually watchin an apple punch a rutabaga.

I couldn't here the voice acting :( Turn down the music my dude. Expect from that, sounds like a cool project your working on :)

Some scary spooky stuff my man! Love it!

SilentChimaru responds:

Thanks man ! :D

Try putting more detail into your characters and backgrounds.

Funny and awesome man, always love your stuff!

storytellerYT responds:

Thank you! I do it for you guys

Your learning still haha, nice original work. Try using more colour and put more detail into your backgrounds. The sound design is okay.
I can see your video is compressed. ( Meaning when you exported the video on adobe flash, it decreased to definition and quality) Id'e say try using Swivel, it's a software made for newgrounds users! All you have to do is drop the original flash file into Swivel and it will be made into a .mov or .mp4 or others without any compression! Pretty good software.

I can also see your a big fan of Eddsworld, this shows in your animation and artwork style, and hey, thats a good thing! What id'e like to see is more colour and longer animations and you'd be expecting 4-5 stars for all your pieces. :)

goretoons responds:

I just learned about Swivel today from a friend of mine! But I'm very greatful for your feedback, and aw shucks you caught me...Yes yes I am a fan of Eddsworld.

I tried fixing up the audio but i couldn't get it to the quality I wanted it at, but since I'm too scared to mess up anything I leave Flash at its default settings and all that junk. ;w; But again thank you for the feedback.

Nice story telling, work on making the animation smoother.

This is really cool, really funny aswell. Good job!

Voice acting and more animation to the characters would have made this better. Eitherway, the story line is interesting and funny.

College Student - Level 3 BTEC Animation. Loved the idea to create worlds, characters and designs that could entertain and inspire others. Happy to talk to anyone and Hopefully I'll make lot's of awesome friends on here!

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